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shreya wrote:hi parminder,
read ur work, its really nice, but one complain, why not writing these days, no new poetry for a long time..
takc care
Dnangrani wrote:Parminderji
aapki Rachnayein satya ko darshati hui dil ko choo jati hai. Pahle bhi aap ko chah ke saath padti rahi hoon
Devi
shreya wrote:aziz ji,
aapki 1984 waala geet dil ko chhoo gayaa,
daad qubool ho janaab.
Dnangrani wrote:Jis Ne Raaton Mein Khud Jaagkar Mujh Ko Bhi Nahin Sone Diya
Gham Chhalakne Laga Tere Vaadon Ne Lekin Na Rone Diya
Haan Wo Tum Hi To Ho
Parminderji
Bahut hi sunder surmayi nazm hai , paak jazb piroye hai aapne.
Mubarak ho
Devi
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